Can you revise this paragraph written about the novel Fahrenheit 451? PLEASE? 12 points!! :) MUCH appreciated!?

Ray Bradbury’s Fahrenheit 451 exposes a futuristic society where firemen startS fires instead of stopPING them to HELP PROVIDE knowledge, thinking AND AWARENESS. Guy Montag, the main character(,) and one of these firemen, ARE faced with several unfortunate difficulties throughout the novel. There are occasional taboos in thE story; SUCH AS a murder plus a suicide attempt, and words such as "hell" and "damn". Nonetheless, these sort of things are typicalLY and usually normal in the average teenager’s life. Besides, the underlying message in Fahrenheit 451 is a powerful one, presenting a society in which there are no books; therefore, no real knowledge. High school students should read the novel despite the few minor disapprovals.